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Fume (Re-do!) by RandomPedestrian Fume (Re-do!) by RandomPedestrian
!!!ATTENTION: I'm now doing commissions! Check out my profile for details.

I re-did a piece I posted on here not too long ago [link] , because frankly I hated how it turned out the first time. Hopefully you guys like this one better, too!
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Daeron-Singollo Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
what I do really like is the atmosphere of this picture, cause it shows a strong battle of life or death, although I wonder if fume by itself would be a powerful attack xD
what type of scenery did you try to draw? :3
RandomPedestrian Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013
SORRY IT TOOK ME SO LONG TO REPLY. Thank you so much! And yeah, fume itself is probably not that powerful. But it looks cool and it's sorta her signature. Or at least it is in my mind.

And I was going for sorta... What is it, Gobi Desert? No, not that. Hm. The plateau you have to cross in order to get from Dalia to Madra. The one with all the crumbly step things. That place, haha.
Daeron-Singollo Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
pfff xD your deviation has been in my inbox for like 3months before I commented, so dont feel sorry for taking long to reply xD
uhuh! I also considered fume to be the special moveset of Jenna, so it is really sweet ;w;

ahhh, I understand :D it indeed is very fitting ;w; I was a little disapointed that in dark dawn, you hardly have any towns from the previous games... (and also in the lost age btw, unless you used that special hover boat trick) I would've loved to see some of the old towns and how they have evolved since then ;w;
RandomPedestrian Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013
Aw, thank you! I really appreciate it, and I'm glad you like it. And agreed! I really want to take Felix/Matthew to Tolbi. That place was awesome. Or even Lemuria. Lemuria was the shit. Haha
Daeron-Singollo Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
although I doubt Lemuria will be here anymore though, considering everything changed and stuff.... but lets hope to see some remnants of the lost age ;w;
I was sad when campa burned down though =p
flutterdoodle Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
It's really interesting flipping back and forth between the two versions. Personally, I like both! I do think your re-draw of Chalice is a great improvement in this version. She pops out more, her pose seems more grounded, and I really like that cut in her leg. It's just really well done and a nice detail. ALSO THE BACKGROUND. I really like the revisions you made and I think this approach fits with your style a lot better.
Can I just say that Jenna's feet look great? That and her hair whipping around are possibly the best parts of this picture. I really like how you indicated the motion and texture in her hair. Also props for drawing her face from that kind of angle.
RandomPedestrian Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
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Cicada1317 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
I love the colors in your pictures! ^^
RandomPedestrian Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
Aw, thank you! c:
Tiramia Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I agree, this shot is definitely more defined and easier to see. I love the way you did the dragon's face in Plume, it's like a well-highlighted cloud!
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