what I do really like is the atmosphere of this picture, cause it shows a strong battle of life or death, although I wonder if fume by itself would be a powerful attack xD what type of scenery did you try to draw? :3
pfff xD your deviation has been in my inbox for like 3months before I commented, so dont feel sorry for taking long to reply xD uhuh! I also considered fume to be the special moveset of Jenna, so it is really sweet ;w;
ahhh, I understand it indeed is very fitting ;w; I was a little disapointed that in dark dawn, you hardly have any towns from the previous games... (and also in the lost age btw, unless you used that special hover boat trick) I would've loved to see some of the old towns and how they have evolved since then ;w;
It's really interesting flipping back and forth between the two versions. Personally, I like both! I do think your re-draw of Chalice is a great improvement in this version. She pops out more, her pose seems more grounded, and I really like that cut in her leg. It's just really well done and a nice detail. ALSO THE BACKGROUND. I really like the revisions you made and I think this approach fits with your style a lot better. Can I just say that Jenna's feet look great? That and her hair whipping around are possibly the best parts of this picture. I really like how you indicated the motion and texture in her hair. Also props for drawing her face from that kind of angle.